Evan and his dad discuss the essay on the core reasons for selfish human problems as the blank screen of his laptop reflects his mounting frustration. The cursor on Evan’s laptop blinks like it’s mocking him. The white screen burns his eyes. The essay prompt glares back:
What is the core reason for the selfish human problems in the USA, including crime, war, oppression, and depression?
He leans back in his desk chair. Downstairs, the TV murmurs. The fridge hums. A headache throbs behind his eyes. His chest buzzes, thin and sharp, like panic starting to hatch.
He should have a thesis by tomorrow. He has nothing.
He slams the laptop shut, grabs his notebook, and heads downstairs.
His dad sits at the kitchen table with a mug of tea, scrolling through his phone. The overhead light throws soft rings across the wood.
“Dad,” Evan says, dropping his notebook with a dull thud. “My homework is to write this paper on ‘What is the core reason for the selfish human problems in the USA, including crime, war, oppression, and depression?’ It came up in class, and I disagreed with literally everyone. Even the teacher.”
His dad looks up, one eyebrow raised. “That’s a big question. What do you think?”
Evan shoves his hair off his forehead. “That’s the problem. I couldn’t give clear reasons. I just… couldn’t accept any of the ones they gave.”
A corner of his dad’s mouth lifts. “Hmm. A young rebel. Give me some examples of their reasoning.”
Evan drops into the chair across from him. The scene from class slams back into his mind. The buzzing in his chest sharpens into anger.
“The rich kids blamed the poor,” he says. “The poor kids blamed the rich. Conservatives and extremists just blamed each other. Some said we have too much freedom; others said we don’t have enough. One kid literally said there are no problems and he doesn’t care anyway.”
He remembers their laughter, loud and smug.
“Others blamed the devil, karma, God, or random evolution,” he goes on. “No one would admit they’re part of the problem. Almost everyone agreed that there are no real long‑term solutions. It was… weirdly enlightening, actually.”
His dad’s expression softens. “Wow. I don’t know what to say.”
“I was disappointed,” Evan says. “The fault always landed on the opposite side. Each group said their way of life is right, so the other side must be responsible for everything bad. I felt like I was stuck between a bunch of five‑year‑olds yelling, ‘I’m right, and you’re wrong.’ No one could step back far enough to see the big picture. Like, the cosmic picture.”
He studies the grain of the table. Every answer from class felt solid for half a second, then crumbled.
“Everything they said was partially true,” he admits, “but nothing went deep enough. We talked about poverty and crime, and the big solution was: someone’s poor because they don’t have money, so give them money. From the super‑rich, obviously.”
He ticks points off on his fingers.
“The hungry should be given food. The addicts should be given drugs. The homeless should get free housing. Criminals shouldn’t be punished because it’s ‘not their fault’ they turned to crime. Just let them wander around and absorb ‘good examples’ from society.”
He looks up. “Something’s off there, right?”
His dad holds his gaze. “What did you propose?”
“I wasn’t asked,” Evan says. His voice tightens. “The teacher decided to make me the example. He had the class vote to force me to divide my savings equally among the thirty students.”
His dad blinks. “He did what?”
“He knows I have a job,” Evan says quietly. “He knows I’ve been investing. So he turned me into ‘the rich kid’ and tried to prove his solution on me. Naturally, I was the only one who voted against it.”
The memory of thirty pairs of eyes on him makes his stomach twist.
“Everyone said it was unfair,” he adds. “That I’m their age but have more money. They demanded equality.”
His dad leans back and folds his arms. “What happened?”
Evan stares down and lets his imagination replay what almost happened.
“In my head,” he says slowly, “I stand up and punch him in the face. I slam the door on my way out. Then the principal calls you, and I get expelled.”
His dad gives a low whistle.
“In my daydream,” Evan continues, “the students tell their parents some rich brat attacked their all‑wise teacher. The parents and kids show up on our lawn and set the house on fire to ‘teach us a lesson.’ We grab our guns and shoot everyone to prove we have the right to be wealthy and protect our property.”
He nearly feels the heat of the imaginary flames licking his skin.
“There’s insurance on the house,” he says. “So we keep our money. But we have to change our names and move because the friends and relatives of the rebels blame us for the deaths. The bodies are on our property, so technically, they get charged with trespassing with intent to murder. After the riot, those rebellious students have fewer parents earning money, so they’re less wealthy.”
His dad lets out a breath, half-stunned, half-amused. “I thought I heard shouting outside earlier,” he says dryly. “So what do you actually do?”
Evan picks at a chip on the table. “In reality, I realize neither violence nor running away fixes anything. So I make a counterproposal. I tell them: ‘Everyone gives me their extra savings, and I’ll combine our money and invest it for all of us.’”
His dad’s eyebrows shoot up.
“I write a five‑page contract,” Evan says. A thread of pride slips into his voice. “It guarantees everyone’s share in our joint account goes up under my management. They believe I know how to invest, so they’re excited to sign. No one reads the last two clauses.”
He remembers the stack of stapled pages in his hand, the flurry of pens, everyone rushing to sign like they’re joining some secret club.
“What are the last two clauses?” his dad asks.
Evan looks up, a crooked smile forming. “They agree to a twenty‑five percent yearly service fee… and they get no access to their shares for a hundred years.”
His dad winces and laughs at the same time. “Somewhere in there,” he says, “is a clue to the root of human problems. Although taking all their money doesn’t help them.”
Evan nods slowly. The satisfaction from his fantasy scam drains away. “Eventually, I point out the last two clauses. Everyone freaks out and wants to back out.”
“And you?” his dad asks.
“I agree,” Evan says, “as long as they drop the whole ‘force Evan to divide his savings’ thing.”
Silence settles over the kitchen. The fridge hums, the clock ticks, the house breathes.
Inside Evan’s mind, the question on the notebook page keeps burning.
As Evan and his dad explore the concepts of free choice and staying in Soul School, the quiet of the night settles around them. That night, the house finally goes quiet. The TV clicks off. Outside, the street falls into darkness except for a few porch lights glowing like watchful eyes.
Evan sits curled on the couch, notebook balanced on his knees. His dad is in the armchair across from him, a book open in his hands but clearly forgotten.
“So,” Evan says, staring at his own scrawled notes, “what is the core problem with humans?”
His dad closes the book on one finger and thinks. “Humans don’t understand their long‑term journey,” he says at last. “They have conflicting motivations and goals. Very few accept and stay focused on their true reason for being.”
Evan turns that over. The words sound too big—then they start fitting into place.
“I think free choice is the core problem,” he says slowly. “Humans wreck everything when they’re allowed to do whatever they want.”
His pen spins between his fingers.
“I get it,” he adds. “Consequences are supposed to teach us to choose wisely and act… I don’t know… virtuously. But the system is too slow. People pick a lifestyle blindly, then accidentally build their own personal hell. By the time the consequences hit, they forget what caused it.”
He keeps going, talking to his dad and to the notebook and to something else he can’t see.
“People trap themselves in self‑made worlds,” he says, “and don’t realize they actually have the power to change anything. They keep using their abilities to build the same broken reality instead of learning to choose better.”
His dad studies him. “Well said,” he replies quietly. Humans are selfishly focused on avoiding pain and chasing pleasure. They let themselves be manipulated by negative feelings instead of radiating virtuous ones.”
The word radiating hooks in Evan’s mind. He pictures feelings as currents—glowing or dark—pouring out of people and soaking everything.
“Most people don’t have balanced virtues,” his dad goes on. “They don’t seek the mental discipline they’d need to avoid addictions and vices. They aren’t interested in any long‑term purpose. But the requirement for continued sponsorship of your soul”—he taps his chest—“is to stay in school, study your lessons, and pass your tests.”
Evan frowns. “Sponsorship?”
“Think of it like this,” his dad says. “You join a cosmic club that gives you benefits—guidance, protection, inspiration. That support comes from your master teachers. If you don’t stay in Soul School and keep trying, you get kicked out of the club. You lose a lot of that help.”
A strange image forms in Evan’s mind: a glowing membership card hovering over his heart, flickering in and out.
He writes two words in his notebook: Soul School.
The letters look ordinary. They don’t feel ordinary.
Evan learns how cosmic laws and the afterlife relate to solving societal problems while agonizing over his newest homework prompt. The next afternoon, Evan sprawls across his bed, textbooks dumped in a pile on the floor. Chemistry fries his brain. English stacks more on top of it.
A new assignment blares from his planner: Describe how we can solve today’s societal problems.
He stares at the words, then drags himself downstairs. His dad stands at the counter making coffee.
“My next assignment,” Evan says, grabbing a mug, “is to describe how we can solve today’s societal problems.”
His dad sets the pot down. “Predicting the future depends on understanding past outcomes and consequences,” he says. “Being connected with our souls helps us see into the past.”
“Dad, this is for school,” Evan protests, but the complaint sounds weak, even to him.
His dad continues anyway. “Any discussion about solving the world’s problems has to start with two big questions. First: Does a part of each person continue to exist after the body dies? Is there a continuing consciousness that suffers consequences or reaps rewards after death?”
Evan goes still. The question feels familiar, but here it lands like a test he doesn’t know he’s been studying for.
“I need to believe my… mystic self lives on,” he says, surprising himself with the honesty in his voice. “If it doesn’t, what’s the point of anything beyond having fun and being happy right now? Tomorrow I might blink out.”
He watches the steam spiral off his coffee like a ghost signal.
“It also feels logical,” he adds. “My body semi‑dies when I sleep every night, but something keeps dreaming.”
His dad nods, satisfied. “Second question,” he says. “What determines how that continuing existence plays out? Are there fixed cosmic laws that lead to predictable outcomes, or is everything random and unknowable?”
He rinses a spoon, the rush of water suddenly loud.
“For example,” his dad says, “can humans predict the outcome of legalizing all drugs, defunding the police, and decriminalizing most crimes?”
Evan leans on the counter. “Honestly? Kids in grade school could guess that lawlessness creates chaos. But what does suspending rules and law enforcement have to do with cosmic laws and an afterlife?”
“That’s the connection you need to make,” his dad says. “Can administrators predict the consequences of promoting a ‘right’ to create personal fantasy and delusional lifestyles? Can they know what happens if they force others to accept those false identities as real?”
Evan’s jaw tightens. The classroom debate flickers in his mind, layered with news clips, memes, and endless arguments in comment sections.
“Normal people know,” he says carefully, “that encouraging insanity will destabilize a society. So… what exactly is your point?”
His dad’s eyes narrow, not in anger, but in focus. “Have you noticed,” he asks, “that forces are deliberately working to create chaos and destabilize society?”
Evan’s stomach dips. He thinks of headlines that feel staged, of how fast people snap into sides, of the numb look in classmates’ eyes.
“Of course I see it,” he says. “I just don’t understand why.”
Silence hangs between them, thick as steam. Then his dad leans back against the counter like he’s about to deliver a lecture and a confession at the same time.
Evan discovers how immoral manipulators orchestrate chaos and the need for spirit warriors as the reality of the unseen war sets in. Late afternoon light slants orange through the kitchen window. Dust motes hang in the air like tiny planets.
Evan feels like he’s standing on the edge of an invisible map.
“Let’s use deductive reasoning,” his dad says. “Who would promote gender confusion, lawlessness, and the breakdown of the basic family unit, while knowing the outcome?”
Evan folds his arms. His first instinct is to blame politicians, corporations and some generic “they.” But something in his dad’s tone makes him hesitate.
“I can see where you’re going,” he says slowly. “It sounds like today’s problems are being… orchestrated. By leaders who want distraction, confusion, rebellion.”
The word orchestrated lands heavy in his chest, like someone somewhere is holding a conductor’s baton over the whole planet.
“Immoral manipulators,” he says, the phrase sliding into place, “aren’t blind or stupid. They have a long‑term plan to wreck anything that would help the soul succeed. In some afterlife.”
As he speaks, a cold tingle crawls up his arms. The kitchen feels suddenly smaller.
“The Tempters,” he adds, testing the word on his tongue, “recruit innocent souls to help carry out their dark agenda. With lies. With fake promises. So the first part of solving today’s problems is: eliminate the dark forces and wake up their programmed recruits.”
His dad exhales slowly. “Perfect,” he says. “I’m impressed you pulled all that from my questions.”
Pride and unease hit Evan at the same time.
“But why do you jump straight to eliminating the dark forces,” his dad asks, “instead of healing them? Shouldn’t they be forgiven? Given another chance?”
Evan shakes his head, jaw hardening. “These beings—whatever they are—aren’t clueless,” he says. “They’re intelligent, immoral monsters who fight their way into power on purpose. Not just for fame or money, but to carry out their plan.”
Faces flash in his mind: people behind podiums, screens, slogans. Shadows behind them.
“They want to distract souls from Soul School,” he says. “They’re willing to sacrifice their own existence to do it. They know what they’re doing. They’re not redeemable. As long as they exist, they’ll keep recruiting more souls.”
He hesitates, then adds, quieter, “Part of me wants to understand their motive first, so I can… I don’t know… counsel them? But that sounds stupid out loud.”
“Understanding your enemies matters,” his dad says. “But having a heart‑to‑heart cup of tea with a wolf pack doesn’t end well.”
Evan huffs a short, humorless laugh.
“Terrorist suicide bombers can’t exist peacefully in a stable society,” his dad continues. “A declared oppressor attacks and destroys enemies without mercy. That’s their nature.”
Evan imagines standing in front of some towering shadow‑thing, trying to talk it down while its teeth drip.
“Before I try to eliminate any oppressors,” he says, “I need to defend myself. I need to identify my enemies and their intentions. Their false beliefs blind a ton of vulnerable souls. Hopeful, trusting people walk into a battle zone without armor and die.”
The words echo inside him. In his mind, armor forms around his body—not metal, but condensed light hugging his skin.
“The dark forces distract, weaken, and corrupt their recruits,” his dad says, “then use them as targets for the good guys’ anger and frustration. The good guys end up attacking recruits instead of the real monsters.”
He pauses.
“The corrupted souls,” he says, “stand like a shield around the monsters.”
Evan’s chest tightens. “So to get to the monsters,” he says, “we have to destroy the corrupted souls first? That’s how wars work, right? The enemy trains their distracted, weakened recruits to rebel and fight without really knowing why. Youth are the most vulnerable because they usually lack self‑discipline.”
“It’s clear,” his dad says, “that souls fighting souls is exactly what the dark forces want. They coach from the sidelines and manage a battle where everyone loses.”
He gazes past Evan, like he sees a stadium full of invisible players.
“At what point,” he asks softly, “does the football team turn on their coach and ask why they’re destroying their bodies and minds over a senseless, distracting game?”
“At least football still has rules,” Evan mutters. “Our political and justice systems? They’ve ditched virtues and morality. Deception, bribery, and blackmail are how people get power.
“We can’t even trust a fair election anymore,” he adds. “So how are these hidden monsters supposed to be eliminated?”
His dad’s gaze sharpens. “Souls in Soul School,” he says, “have to advance until they’re trained spirit warriors. That’s one reason the dark forces work so hard to get souls to drop out and join the wrong side.”
Evan’s heartbeat kicks up. The word warrior lands inside him with a strange, dangerous heat.
“Why can’t we just wait for the almighty Savior to show up and fix everything?” he asks. “Why is it on us? On soul students?”
“Becoming a spiritual warrior,” his dad says, “is one of the requirements to graduate from Soul School. Earth is a battleground of light and darkness. It’s also a training ground—to practice using the soul’s wisdom, virtues, and powers.”
Evan rubs the back of his neck. The air feels heavier.
“Why do we have to be virtuous and play by the rules,” he mutters, “if the dark side doesn’t?”
“Because acting with purity, obedience, and genuine care,” his dad answers, “attracts more Holy Spirit power without weakening the soul. We need to stay in Soul School to become spirit warriors. That’s non‑negotiable.”
Evan exhales hard. “Okay. Let me summarize to see if I have this.”
He glances out the window. Cars roll past. Sprinklers spin. Someone walks a dog. The world looks normal, but his mind overlays it with shadow‑grids and invisible currents.
“Monsters are causing the problems,” he says. “They’re not of this world. They’re unseen and can’t be harmed by the police, FBI, or military. Most people don’t believe they exist. Others think the Savior will deal with them. Our best hope is for souls to become spirit warriors by… enrolling in some mystical school.”
He sighs.
“But almost no one wants to give up their human desires to do that,” he adds, “and actually surrender to their mission.”
“We don’t need billions of warriors,” his dad says quietly. “Maybe just a million. United. Focused.”
For the first time, the number doesn’t sound completely impossible.
“If more people understood that life on Earth is a school for soul learning,” Evan says slowly, “they’d focus on graduating and creating their best afterlife. Nothing else really makes sense. Living my life to create my best afterlife sounds like the smartest way to live. Everything else feels… stupid.”
His dad smiles faintly. “So, plan number one is to encourage more humans to create their optimal afterlife by developing wisdom, virtues, and powers in Soul School.”
He studies Evan’s face. “What about a lousy afterlife? Does it punish those who choose an amusement‑park lifestyle?”
Evan chews his lip. “That’s only fair if the Amusers—people who live like that—actually understand they’re creating a lousy afterlife. I don’t see why they should be punished for choosing fantasy if they don’t know.”
“So you’d reward the ones who don’t know and don’t care with a heavenly afterlife,” his dad says, “even if they didn’t earn it? In that case, everyone would pretend to be ignorant Amusers and get the best of both worlds.”
Evan groans. “Okay, I get it. Maybe the Amusers can come back in another body and get another chance?”
“So they live a life chasing pleasure,” his dad replies, “die, then live another life chasing pleasure, die, then another…”
“That’s enough,” Evan cuts in, throwing up his hands. “Fine. How about this: When Amusers die, they go to a temporary hellish afterlife, then get another shot. They experience the lousy afterlife they created, but only for a short time. Every time they don’t change, their crappy‑afterlife period doubles.”
His dad tilts his head. “Are they going to remember that terrible afterlife when they get another body? What helps a soul learn if every lifetime starts with a memory wipe?”
Evan hesitates. “People’s brains are born empty of memories,” he says. “But their souls still remember. Right? The part that remembers won’t want to go back. It’ll try to avoid being an Amuser again.”
“Makes sense,” his dad says slowly. “Sort of. The ‘I don’t know, I don’t care’ human consciousness will still try to drown out that voice. The flashing lights of the amusement park are hard to ignore.”
Evan looks out the window again. Traffic crawls by, ordinary and unreal.
“That basically looks like what’s happening now,” he mutters.
He takes a breath. “Okay. I’ve got one last idea.”
His dad raises an eyebrow.
“Instead of letting the Amusers have a full life in the amusement park,” Evan says, “their self‑created hellish afterworld starts bleeding into the physical world. They experience hell on Earth.”
His dad actually laughs. “Awesome,” he says, half joking, half serious. “Like a swirling dark hole opening up, spewing karmic slime and astral monsters to eat people alive. That would get the news’ attention.”
Evan grimaces. “It needs to be more subtle. Gradual. You can’t just drop real monsters on kids.”
His dad leans forward. “Let me summarize,” he says. “You want to heal misguided, immoral, delusional humans by gradually bringing hell into the physical world. That’s like reforming criminals by defunding law enforcement and eliminating penalties, then slowly bringing the rule of law back.”
Evan rubs his forehead. “I don’t see any other way,” he mutters. “The karmic tap on the shoulder doesn’t work. The slap in the face doesn’t work. The knockdown doesn’t work. What now?”
His dad’s voice softens. “Trying to fix motivation through taps, slaps, and knockdowns keeps getting limited results,” he says. “Mankind allows its brains, emotions, and desires to be controlled. The manipulation through schools, businesses, social media, and governments—this whole web has to be broken.
“The spirit warriors,” he adds, “have to band together and help mankind.”
Evan stares at him. “Look, I have schoolwork,” he says, almost laughing. “A job. Chores. A show I’m behind on. Social media. When exactly am I signing up for this ‘Mystic National Guard’?”
This time, his dad doesn’t smile. “That,” he says, “is a major requirement for soul students.”
Evan’s shoulders sag. “So after all this talk about how they can help themselves,” he says quietly, “it still ends up being our duty to save them. No wonder there are so few mystic students still trying to graduate. This trial sucks.”
His voice cracks.
“I don’t get why I have to help rescue and wake up lazy, indulgent Amusers. Isn’t it justice to let them suffer in the hell they made?”
“Maybe,” his dad says. “But if you don’t help them, they keep feeding and supporting your enemies. They stay in the way of your victories. The Amusers are mentally and emotionally controlled to make Soul School harder for you. They create and live out dark fantasies that bring hell on Earth. They supply food and ammunition for the monsters.”
Something in Evan’s mind clicks.
“So helping and protecting mankind,” he says, “is like cutting off the enemy’s supply lines?”
“Yes.” His dad nods. “I recommend protecting, nurturing, and teaching the Amusers as if they were rebellious teens. Which, in a way, they are.”
Evan swallows. His pulse throbs in his throat.
“To summarize,” he says, “I’m an evolving soul using a temporary body to learn lessons in Soul School. My soul has specific things to learn to create my optimal afterlife.
“There’s eternal reality and unreality,” he continues, “Truth and fantasy. There’s a real battle of good versus evil. Rebellious dark beings lose their connection to their higher selves. They have to feed on the energy of light‑bearing souls to survive. They’re devolving and know their time is limited, so they hate anything good and of the light.”
His words speed up, like something inside him is dictating.
“Their main goal is to stop soul growth. Their secondary goal is to steal light and energy from souls to keep going. They can’t feed on pure mystic energy, so they trick souls into misusing it first. When a soul’s reserves run empty, it has to use previously misused, contaminated energy. That creates more chaos in the physical world. That’s how hell gets here. They keep the soul in the shadows, disconnected.
“This whole battle,” he says, breathless, “keeps going because Amusers supply the monsters with food and ammo. So I have to sacrifice some fun and join the mystic guard to save everyone.”
He stops.
Silence stretches long.
“Great summary,” his dad says finally. “But you left out appealing to the mystic graduates who are willing to sponsor and help you. The best way to fight back is to target the dark forces that use mind control, emotional manipulation, and distracting desires.”
Evan exhales, half laugh, half groan. “That’s a good idea,” he says. “But how do we do that? The fallen ones are hidden. They’re not physical. We can’t use name‑calling or guns or knives to take out the bad guys.”
His dad leans forward—the air in the room shifts, like pressure before a storm.
As Evan and his dad discuss using virtuous light energy and verbal prayer as weapons, the true nature of mystic combat becomes clear. “The first thing soul students have to learn,” his dad says, “is how to protect themselves and control their minds, feelings, and desires. A spirit warrior can’t use hatred, anger, fear, revenge, or intimidation as weapons. Those twist energy into chaos. We have to use virtuous energy instead.”
Evan snorts. “I can see it now,” he says. “I confront a monster and go, ‘Stand back, or I’ll be honest with you,’ or, ‘Wow, nice teeth. Want to get tea and biscuits?’ Or, ‘Be nice and stop eating souls, or I’ll love you to death.’ Or, ‘Put your guns away, I’m meditating.’”
The ridiculous pictures actually shrink his fear.
“Being virtuous,” his dad says dryly, “does not mean being weak and helpless.”
“Right,” Evan says. “So I’m supposed to say, ‘Don’t hurt me or I’ll feel obedient. Stay away, I have contagious wisdom. Don’t be mean, or I’ll keep forgiving you. Stop shooting, or I’ll radiate divine mercy at you.’”
His dad laughs, but his eyes stay serious. “Hatred, anger, and violent destruction are powerful,” he says. “But they corrupt energy into chaos. They aren’t useful weapons for spirit warriors because they invite more hell here.
“You don’t need training to scream when you’re angry,” he adds. “Anyone can light a stick of dynamite. Mystic knights have to learn to direct Holy Spirit energy as rays of light.”
He looks directly at Evan.
“Spirit warriors can use verbal prayer to direct virtuous light energy,” he says. “We visualize and create mystic shielding to protect ourselves and others from enemy mind control and emotional manipulation.”
Evan tries to picture it. In his mind’s eye, words leave his mouth not as sound, but as shining threads wrapping around people he cares about. He actually shivers.
“So if they won’t protect themselves,” he says quietly, “we have to do it for them. Why is that my job when they refuse?”
“This is part of your mission and purpose,” his dad says. “Mystic warriors use divine energy to fight back against darkness. It can only happen through those who currently have physical bodies.”
“Let me guess,” Evan mutters. “Your best solution is to find people with advanced soul skills and get them to team up.”
“Absolutely,” his dad replies. “Think of it as target practice to hone your skills. This is your chance to master directing creative mystic energy.”
Evan smirks. “Nice. You want me to think of the fallen ones as target practice. Are you hinting that this battle on Earth is boot camp for something bigger?”
His dad winces. “Oops,” he says. “If I were, forget that. Just pretend you’re in boot camp, period.”
A slow, electric awareness crawls up Evan’s arms. He imagines invisible drills and surprise tests he doesn’t even recognize yet.
“Through verbal prayers,” his dad continues, “the power of the spoken word can break people out of hypnotic ignorance. It’s like giving a command: ‘Wake up. Wake up.’”
“Sounds oversimplified,” Evan says. “Magic spoken words and visualizations beat the dark forces? No wonder there aren’t enough mystic warriors. Let’s have a sing‑along and watch the fallen ones fall like dominoes. Do we get wands or genie lamps too?”
His dad smiles faintly. “Your soul can stream mystic light and direct it at specific targets,” he says. “Imagine a car covered in mud. You can wash it clean with water from a hose—if the water is clean and you aim it.”
Evan sees it: the hose as his voice, the water a blast of pale blue light under pressure.
“You need the right sequence of words to break spells of mind control,” his dad continues. “It’s like breaking a curse. The soul reaches out with intense, virtuous light to blast away the controlling spells cast by the enemy. First, the warrior creates a protective force field around people. Then, they fill the inside with Holy Spirit energy.”
Now the energy is sharper in Evan’s mind: a dome of soft white light around someone, then streams of gold and violet pouring in.
“I can see how virtuous light can protect me,” Evan admits. “I actually like that. I want to learn more.”
His eyes spark.
“Most monsters and evil creatures avoid fire and light,” he says. “If I have a firewall around me, it’s easier to stay a soul student. And putting firewalls around my friends? Around the lazy Amusers who don’t know or care?”
A crooked grin tugs at his mouth.
“That should be enough to win, right?” he says. “No more food for the fallen. They starve. Why hasn’t that worked so far?”
“Because billions of loyal recruits surround the dark forces,” his dad says. “The shield is thick.”
Evan blows out a breath. “So if a nuclear missile heads toward our city,” he says, “your best defense is a bunch of mystic warriors standing outside, raising their hands, aiming Holy Spirit energy at it? I guess that’s better than singing ‘Give Peace a Chance.’”
“In essence,” his dad says, “yes. Oversimplified—but yes. We’d be directing a small stream of mystic light. The armies in Heaven would see it as us marking a target. It gives the graduate master's permission to act on our behalf.”
He leans back.
“When we pinpoint a problem,” he says, “it activates the intercession of graduated masters on the mystical plane. They can send blue lightning bombs, violet‑flame spheres, the golden light of illumination, and other forms of Holy Spirit energy.”
In Evan’s mind, the sky cracks open, not with fire, but with color: streaks of electric blue, spinning globes of violet flame, rivers of molten gold pouring into someplace just out of sight.
“This mystic light,” his dad says, “acts directly in the physical world without going through embodied souls. Soul students can carry a trickle of energy, which activates a waterfall of Holy Spirit energy from beings of high attainment who want to help souls graduate.”
“That’s like tattling on bullies,” Evan says slowly, “so teachers finally step in. Nothing stops the bullies if the victims stay silent. But the ones who expose them usually get in trouble instead of the bullies.”
“The mystical beings with high attainment,” his dad says, “have the skills, energy reserves, and power to intercede. They respond when called.”
The kitchen suddenly feels less like a room and more like a war table.
Evan realizes asking questions breaks mind control and exposes revealed reality while reflecting on the changes in his worldview. Days blur. School. Homework. Scrolling. But under the surface, something is different.
Evan starts seeing people as souls in training. Teachers become half‑asleep guides or full‑time Amusers. Rules turn into tests.
One evening, his dad calls him back to the kitchen table.
“You have plenty of questions,” his dad says, “and you’re not afraid to ask them out loud. That triggers enlightening discussions. Most human minds are brainwashed and controlled. These souls have to learn to be open‑minded and full of new questions instead of clinging to false beliefs and stress.”
He taps the tabletop.
“Their spoken questions,” he says, “can open doors to Truth. Enough Truth can overpower misunderstandings. Programming and mind control leave no space for new Truth to override false beliefs.”
“They think they already have all the answers,” Evan says. “What makes them start asking real questions?”
His dad’s eyes light up. “That,” he says, “is an excellent mind‑opening question.”
He leans back.
“At least half the population,” he says, “is waiting for their Savior to come back any minute and fix everything. Only those who blindly believe they’ll be saved… can be saved.”
Evan snorts. “I can go along with that,” he says. “Give me enough motivation, and I’ll believe anything for a while. Logic optional, benefits required.”
He grins. “So when is the Savior coming?”
“It’s an unrevealed secret,” his dad replies.
“What decides when he comes?” Evan presses. “Is there anything souls can do to shorten the timeline?”
His dad doesn’t flinch. “It’s an unrevealed secret.”
“So what happens if I get tired of waiting on the sidelines and getting bullied?” Evan demands. “How long do I have to sit here believing the Savior is ‘on his way’? What if I want to become like the Savior and stop the bullies myself?”
His dad’s face hardens into something ancient and flat. “It’s simple,” he says. “Believers will be saved. Unbelievers won’t. Those who give up waiting for their Savior won’t be saved.”
The words hit Evan like a locked door.
“Sorry,” he says quietly. “I can’t support that. I prefer Soul School. I’d rather learn about my superpowers.”
His dad’s features soften again. A hint of a smile returns.
“Asking deep questions,” he says, “exposes deep Truth. Every soul should focus on revealing reality instead of building fantasy lifestyles.
“Living in reality instead of illusion,” he continues, “exposes dangers and opportunities. Souls united by reality build a foundation for stability, harmony, and trust. Souls drawn together through separate delusions divide themselves and create chaos, conflict, and war.”
A chill skims down Evan’s spine. He thinks of fandom wars, conspiracy rabbit holes and online mobs.
His notebook fills with new phrases: Revealed Reality. Soul School. Spirit Warriors.
Each word feels like a code waiting to be cracked.
While Abby argues with her dad about hiding her human emotions and refusing her soul, the tension in the living room reaches a boiling point. Saturday feels slower. Softer. The TV is off. Dishes clink quietly in the kitchen.
As Evan walks down the hall, he hears voices from the living room and stops.
His older sister, Abby, sits curled on the couch, knees pulled to her chest. At thirty, she still looks like a haunted junior‑high version of herself: oversized hoodie, messy bun, eyes rimmed in red.
“I feel worthless,” she says. “I’ve been depressed my whole life. I always hid my real feelings from you because I thought you’d criticize me less.”
Their dad sits across from her, leaning forward.
“Interesting,” he says softly. “So you thought no one knew how you were feeling?”
Abby nods, staring at the carpet. “My feelings are secret,” she insists. “No one can know how I feel unless I tell them.”
“Not true,” their dad says. “Your feelings are energy that radiates off you. Masking your feelings hides them from you more than from others. Most humans don’t care about others’ emotions anyway. They see them as random, illogical outbursts.”
Evan leans against the wall, heart tight. He knows Abby struggles. Hearing it out loud still slices.
“I have no self‑esteem,” Abby says, voice shaking, “because you don’t think I’m worthy. You remind me of my faults and expect me to improve, but I’m not worth improving. You drag up the past, but I don’t want to review my failures.”
“Someone who acts foolishly is worth less than someone who acts wisely,” their dad says carefully. “Previous choices don’t disappear just because they’re in the past and you’re in the present.
“You’re forgiven for emptying your spiritual bank account,” he adds, gentler, “but your sponsors won’t refill it over and over. Challenges in life come from a lack of soul mastery—from needing a balance of wisdom, virtue, and power.”
Abby flinches like he’s slapped her.
“You have zero respect for me,” she snaps. “I feel dehumanized by your thoughts and actions. I have high anxiety. I can’t function like a normal person. That’s who I am. Accept it or stay away from me.”
Their dad’s shoulders sag. “I’m sorry,” he says quietly. “But I care more about your soul than about your shifting emotions and your ego’s controlling thoughts.”
“I’m a human being, not a soul,” Abby fires back. “If I ever had a soul, it’s gone. I can’t see or touch this invisible, mystical soul. I have a body and a brain. I don’t need a soul.
“If you don’t accept me as a human,” she says, voice trembling, “don’t talk to me. I’m afraid of you. You have to change your thoughts and feelings that scare me and hurt my feelings.”
Their dad closes his eyes for a moment, lines deepening on his forehead.
“I apologize,” he says. “But your emotional sensitivity doesn’t give you the right to blackmail and enslave me. You have to learn how to shield yourself.”
The word shield rings in Evan’s head. He imagines a thin, flickering layer of light around Abby, collapsing every time anxiety slams into it.
Soul School doesn’t feel like theory anymore. It sits right there on the couch, hugging her knees.
As Evan and his dad meet Diesel and observe his fantasy playground of autonomy, the consequences of refusing societal rules become starkly visible. A week later, Evan and his dad walk downtown for groceries—the parking lot reeks of exhaust and fried food.
Near the entrance, a man with sunburnt cheeks and a tangled beard stretches a ragged tarp between a shopping cart and a tree. The smell hits first: sweat, smoke, and something sour.
“I choose autonomy,” the man declares to the air. “I demand to live outside the rules and laws of society.”
His dad glances at Evan. They slow down.
“If you ignore government regulations,” Evan says cautiously, “then society shouldn’t have to give you benefits reserved for law‑abiding citizens. You basically created your own country. Why should you still be considered an American?”
The man turns. His eyes are bloodshot but sharp. “I choose to create my own world,” he says. “I make my own rules, and everyone else has to accept me for who I am. I claim the freedom to section off a piece of land anywhere and demand instant control of that space.”
“How do you compensate the owner?” Evan asks. “Do you ask permission? Offer to pay rent?”
The man—Diesel, according to the name scrawled on his backpack—shrugs. “I don’t have to,” he says. “I identify as homeless. I identify as all‑one. So wherever I am, my home is.”
“What about local laws?” Evan presses. “Sanitation. Orderliness. Trespassing.”
Diesel snorts. “I didn’t agree to those laws,” he says. “I can disrupt someone’s business and annoy people by begging for money because, in my world, I can do whatever I want. Worst case, I go to jail, where I get free food, free clothes, free shelter, and medical care.”
“You don’t have a job,” Evan says. “You don’t pay taxes or Social Security.”
“Why would I want to be chained to a job?” Diesel scoffs. “I get free food and free medical care from the city.”
“Where’s your drive to succeed?” Evan asks quietly. “Your motivation to contribute to the good of everyone?”
Diesel laughs, bitter and hollow. “Humbug. Fairy‑tale stuff,” he says. “Drugs and alcohol give me my own fantasy playground.”
As they walk away, a strange emptiness tugs at Evan. Diesel’s world is its own amusement park, barely running, lights flickering.
Karmic slime. Invisible monsters. Supply lines. The ideas slam together.
Diesel’s mind doesn’t feel empty. It feels occupied.
Evan accepts his enrollment in Soul School to fight unseen enemies after realizing physical combat cannot solve the ultimate spiritual war. That night, Evan lies on his bed, staring at the cracks in the ceiling. His teacher’s smug voice, Abby’s tears, Diesel’s laugh—they all swirl together.
A knock sounds at his door. His dad steps in and sits at the edge of the bed.
“The real battle isn’t happening in the physical,” his dad says quietly. “Human bodies are dying, and that’s tragic. But leaves fall off a tree every year. The tree ‘dies’ for the winter. It’s reborn in spring with another chance to grow and bear fruit.
“The corruption and death of a soul,” he continues, “are far worse. The enemy’s weapons are being released from a parallel world.”
The room seems to tilt slightly, as if the walls were thinner than before.
“We can keep trying to fend off their attacks,” his dad says, “but we never win until we destroy their base of operations. Killing or imprisoning a human criminal controlled by our enemies doesn’t do much if those enemies stay safe in a hidden fortress.
“Even if humans manage to locate and see that invisible place,” he adds, “no physical weapon can touch it. Our enemies are insulated from human efforts to oppose them. There are endless humans to recruit onto their side. And those who refuse to be corrupted become targets.
“The dark forces,” he says, voice low, “want to separate souls from their consciences through distraction and disillusionment. Souls connected to a human body are the only ones who can access and direct virtuous mystic energy to oppose our enemies.”
The words fall over Evan like a blanket—too heavy, but also strangely warm.
He imagines a web of energy running under everything: classrooms, protests, bedrooms lit by blue screens. Some threads glow. Others clog with dark sludge. For a second, he sees lines of light connecting him to something massive, above and below.
He exhales slowly.
Somewhere deep in his chest, something like a vow starts to form—not a speech, not even words—just a direction.
Soul School is real. The war is real.
And whether he wants it or not, he is already enrolled.
Chapter Synopsis: Evan struggles to write an essay on the core reasons for human problems like war and crime, rejecting shallow societal answers and exploring these issues with his dad. Through deep late-night discussions, they examine how free choice, unmanaged human desires, and spiritual stagnation trap people in self-made realities, introducing the concepts of Soul School, cosmic laws, and the hidden manipulation of immoral dark forces. Evan ultimately realizes that physical combat is useless against unseen spiritual enemies and accepts his role as a student learning to direct virtuous light energy to help wake up distracted humans.
Core Themes & Laws:
the core problem of free choice leading to self-made personal hells and societal breakdown when humans lack self-discipline
the reality of Soul School as a cosmic training ground where souls must develop wisdom, virtues, and powers to graduate
the orchestration of societal chaos, drug use, and lawlessness by hidden dark forces that feed on misused spiritual energy
the necessity of spirit warriors using spoken prayer and visualized protective shields to direct virtuous light instead of physical weapons
the danger of living as an unawakened Amuser who supplies the enemy with mental and emotional energy
Key Entities Featured in this Document:
Evan: A thoughtful student who grapples with difficult essay prompts and discovers the deeper spiritual realities of human suffering and Soul School.
Evan's Dad: A knowledgeable guide who uses Socratic questions to help Evan connect societal problems with cosmic laws and spiritual warfare.
Abby: Evan's older sister who struggles with lifelong depression, anxiety, and a deep resistance to acknowledging her soul.
Diesel: A man living downtown who claims total autonomy and self-delusion, serving as a real-world example of an unawakened Amuser.
Soul School: The mystical training ground and cosmic educational system where souls learn mastery over their thoughts, feelings, and desires to create their optimal afterlife.